Soooooo I just left you a review but I figured I should come on here and comment anyway! First off all, congrats for getting this story featured. It's a great idea to have a scary story for October... whoop!
I flippin love scary stuff, so I took a little gander at your story and I was done in a little over an hour. I LOVE this story! Totally creeps me out, but it's awesome. I wrote a scary story back in the day and I got a lot of feedback but just like you, I had no real direction, so I ended up abandoning it
I hope to God that you don't do that though lol
You seem to sneak in new chapters every couple months or so. Hopefully this will spark some ideas??? *wishful thinking/crosses fingers*
I could really see your writing style change through the chapters which is actually pretty damn cool. You've progressed so much as a writer. It's funny cause I noticed the Witch Hunt thing with the 1960s and I was sitting here going "Ummm... typo?" but I ignored it cause hell, we all make mistakes lol and the fact that you wrote that when you were 12 just impresses me anyway cause it's very creative. The last couple of chapters really show off your writing skills however and you're very talented!
To say the least, I'm hooked! I hope you update soon.
I find it hard sometimes with writers block cause sometimes I get on a streak where I can't stop writing and then all of a sudden I'm stuck and it's a chore to write. I have to force myself to do it. I always expect ideas to just come to me, and sometimes they do, it's just frustrating that it takes so long lol. Do you have any ideas brewing at all?
I totally just wrote a novel! lol Yay. Congrats again!!!
P.S. I love who you'd cast for the movie. That would be a pretty interesting flick with all them fine gentlemen