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Author Topic: One thread for all my updates!  (Read 30597 times)

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Re: One thread for all my updates!
« Reply #60 on: April 19, 2008, 01:39:29 PM »
well I've got someone editing it for me right now, and my brother in law is a technical writer by trade, so he s going to like "edit", edit for me. But I would love anything you have where you could point out inconsistencie s, holes in the plot, useless or cringe worthy dialog. Parts where the story drags as a whole. Parts where you would have liked to see more. Anything that seems too convenient anything that seems out of character to any of them...  things like that.   In fact, maybe I'll move this post to the feedback thread. not that anyone ever responds to that... but you never know. I really would love someone to give me real honest feedback. Sarah seems to be the only one around here that does that for me. And a lot of times she says stuff that I've been wondering about myself and when she brings it up it lest me know that Im not just being overly critical...
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Re: One thread for all my updates!
« Reply #61 on: April 19, 2008, 04:57:44 PM »
Quote from: starbeamz2 on April 19, 2008, 01:16:52 AM
*raises hand* can I be the whiny whore?

I thought we'd already established that. :P

lol Just kidding. :-*
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Re: One thread for all my updates!
« Reply #62 on: April 19, 2008, 08:08:12 PM »
This is really, seriously random, but I just watched "Say Anything" for the first time ever, and, after I was done falling in love with Lloyd Dobler, I realized that he totally reminded me of Brian in Movie...or Brian reminds me of Lloyd..whateve r. Anyway, I thought it was great that they're so different from regular guys, and that the girls in their lives both acknowledge that fact.  Also, the guys that both Brian and Lloyd knew were totally clueless when it came to really knowing what girls wanted lol But yeah, I just thought I'd drop in and say that...

Oh, and if anyone hasn't seen Say Anything...see it! :)
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Re: One thread for all my updates!
« Reply #63 on: April 19, 2008, 08:24:20 PM »
aww. its been WAAAYYY too long since I've seen that, but now I'll have to rent it again cause I'm curious. thanks!
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Re: One thread for all my updates!
« Reply #64 on: April 24, 2008, 03:50:00 AM »
ok, um, yeah...   so I can't believe I just wrote this... hahahahahaha!

or should I say, Muahahahaha!

Title:Fan Friction
Rated: R, for death and graphic violence
Genre: Supernatural/suspense
Summary: After a psycho fan decides to drop the fiction from fan fiction, Nick Carter is forced into an institution until he can recover form the horrific events. But when he finally makes his way back to the spotlight, his fans start dying. All fingers automatically point to Nick, but there is something about all these murders that just doesn't add up. Something mysterious. Not to mention, they all sound eerily familiar.
http://absolutechaos.net/viewstory.php?sid=8964


« Last Edit: May 01, 2008, 03:45:47 PM by honey »
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Re: One thread for all my updates!
« Reply #65 on: April 24, 2008, 03:52:25 AM »
Omg Kelly lol

I love you right now for writing this haha. I've been craving a new unique plot fic.  :-* *runs to read*
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Re: One thread for all my updates!
« Reply #66 on: April 24, 2008, 03:53:05 AM »
Quote from: Rose on April 24, 2008, 03:52:25 AM
Omg Kelly lol

I love you right now for writing this haha. I've been craving a new unique plot fic.  :-* *runs to read*

um, yeah. no guarantees.  haha.
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Re: One thread for all my updates!
« Reply #67 on: April 24, 2008, 03:53:57 AM »
I trust you lol
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Re: One thread for all my updates!
« Reply #68 on: April 24, 2008, 04:04:25 AM »
*dances cause I was the first review*
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Re: One thread for all my updates!
« Reply #69 on: April 24, 2008, 03:25:51 PM »
YAY! i'm looking forward to reading this Kelly. I just wanted to let you know that your summary was very confusing to read. lol I don't know if it is just me nt beiong able to comprehend things but I had to read it about five times to figure out who was in a mental institution and even still i'm kind of confused. lol Just wanted to give you a heads up about that.

I am going to read this before watching SN or maybe i should wait unti after...hrmmm

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Re: One thread for all my updates!
« Reply #70 on: April 24, 2008, 03:30:53 PM »
Quote from: mare on April 24, 2008, 03:25:51 PM
YAY! i'm looking forward to reading this Kelly. I just wanted to let you know that your summary was very confusing to read. lol I don't know if it is just me nt beiong able to comprehend things but I had to read it about five times to figure out who was in a mental institution and even still i'm kind of confused. lol Just wanted to give you a heads up about that.

I am going to read this before watching SN or maybe i should wait unti after...hrmmm



haha see? I knew it was. oh, wait I edited that post. I mean, I'm still working on it, cause it confused me to after I wrote it, but then I got tired and went to bed.

I posted one of those I couldn't figure out how to summarize this one, comments, but then erased it cause I was going to just try to come up with something better. But I haven't yet... I suck...  for some reason I cant figure out how to put into words what the heck is going on in this story.   


anyway, thanks for the heads up Mare, I was already planing on fixing it, I just haven't figured out how to word it yet...   :-\
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Re: One thread for all my updates!
« Reply #71 on: April 24, 2008, 03:34:45 PM »
^ I figured i'd mention it because you had to see me this morning reading it on AC. Granted it was 6am but I was sitting there going wait Nick is dead but he's been institionalize d? lmao i'm so blonde sometimes! I hate writing summaries. I have the hardest time trying to explain what's in my brain.

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Re: One thread for all my updates!
« Reply #72 on: April 24, 2008, 03:36:44 PM »
Quote from: mare on April 24, 2008, 03:34:45 PM
^ I figured i'd mention it because you had to see me this morning reading it on AC. Granted it was 6am but I was sitting there going wait Nick is dead but he's been institionalize d? lmao i'm so blonde sometimes! I hate writing summaries. I have the hardest time trying to explain what's in my brain.



yeah, my problem is I can't really figure out a way to explain the scenario. It's very complicated...
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Re: One thread for all my updates!
« Reply #73 on: April 24, 2008, 03:38:09 PM »
it sounds complicated. It also sounds great though :) so yay to that!
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Re: One thread for all my updates!
« Reply #74 on: April 24, 2008, 03:39:53 PM »
Quote from: mare on April 24, 2008, 03:38:09 PM
it sounds complicated. It also sounds great though :) so yay to that!

lol. i don't know about great, but we'll see.
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