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Re: New story that I'm not too sure of... Please, I need your opinions
« Reply #15 on: February 17, 2009, 08:02:05 AM »

I really like it, sounds like it's gonna be something completely different.  I love AU's and romance.

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Re: New story that I'm not too sure of... Please, I need your opinions
« Reply #16 on: February 17, 2009, 08:33:18 AM »

Yeah... I must admit that I'm pretty critical about what I read aswell. If it's just one big mess or one long post, I won't even bother...

I like constructive criticism, cos it can help you improve it... It's better than someone just telling you it's crap lol.

This one isn't really a romance, sure it has elements of it but it's not the main focus... It's about Nick trying to get through highschool while battling the schizophrenic side. The reason I put the basketball in it, is just cos I know he loves it (and it's another battle, having to be the star amongst the other)... And then it won't be totally out of character.
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Re: New story that I'm not too sure of... Please, I need your opinions
« Reply #17 on: February 17, 2009, 08:52:40 AM »

Sounds really promising. Can't wait to read the rest.
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Re: New story that I'm not too sure of... Please, I need your opinions
« Reply #18 on: February 17, 2009, 11:29:45 PM »

It's an interesting idea to make him schizophrenic. How much research did you do on the topic? I'd love links because i'm thinking of maybe trying out a story using mental health issues and i'd love to get some links besides the ones I already have.

Great start! Can't wait to see what else you come up with!

I'm really excited about seeing some links too! It's super interesting material.
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Re: New story that I'm not too sure of... Please, I need your opinions
« Reply #19 on: February 17, 2009, 11:37:00 PM »

There might be some things worth contributing to the medical glossary thread too
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Re: New story that I'm not too sure of... Please, I need your opinions
« Reply #20 on: February 17, 2009, 11:43:43 PM »

Totally. :) I love when people can contribute to stuff like that, because I'm totally clueless. lol
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Re: New story that I'm not too sure of... Please, I need your opinions
« Reply #21 on: March 09, 2009, 06:44:10 PM »

Hey Jess, check your PMs!
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Re: New story that I'm not too sure of... Please, I need your opinions
« Reply #22 on: June 30, 2009, 09:33:31 PM »

Bumping, as this was one of the fics stolen by Tanja. Just a reminder she's posted other fandom fics as BSB ones too. This was stolen from a HSM fic.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3319399/1/Concealed_Remonstrance
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Re: New story that I'm not too sure of... Please, I need your opinions
« Reply #23 on: June 30, 2009, 09:42:32 PM »

Hahaha, oh Tanja!  We played along with your whole Jess alter ego, but you disappeared before we could out you!  Now that's no fun!
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Re: New story that I'm not too sure of... Please, I need your opinions
« Reply #24 on: June 30, 2009, 09:56:37 PM »

I know, it was so disappointing.

So figured we may as well chime in here too lol.
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Re: New story that I'm not too sure of... Please, I need your opinions
« Reply #25 on: June 30, 2009, 10:36:14 PM »

*sigh* and I so loved our plan lol
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Re: New story that I'm not too sure of... Please, I need your opinions
« Reply #26 on: February 25, 2012, 12:24:26 AM »

I noticed this thread when I came onto this board, and it made me laugh.  Oh Tanja... not gonna lie, I kinda miss that kleptomaniac!  She kept things interesting.
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Re: New story that I'm not too sure of... Please, I need your opinions
« Reply #27 on: February 25, 2012, 12:43:23 AM »

LMFAO! Memoriiiiiiiii ies
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