Summary: Steph wasn't impressed with the birthday present her boyfriend Ian got her. Little did she know that life was about to change completely, after a chance meeting with a dark haired stranger.
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: AJ
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 14905
Read Count: 2589
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Hi! My name is Melissa, but most of my friends call me Mel for short. I've been writing fan fiction on and off since I was 16 and I'm now almost 23, so I've definitely came a LONG way in my writing lol. Still though I've yet to ever finish anything. (Well outside of two stories WAAAY back but they were horrible! lol) I live in NY about an hour from NYC and I'm going to school to become an elementary/ special ed teacher.I've been a fan of BSB since I was 15 and Nick has always been my favorite. I've had the pleasure of meeting Brian, AJ, and Nick in the past, but the only one I have a picture is with AJ. Pleasecheck out my story Under my Skin as well as Sexcapades which I am cowriting w/ my dear friend Laura. |
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Reviews by Mellz Bellz
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Published: 10/09/08 » Updated: 10/09/08
Published: 10/09/08 » Updated: 10/09/08
Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed
Date: 10/09/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Date: 10/09/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Aww... That makes me want to go to Vegas Lol! Very well written, but my only critique is that everything happened WAAAAAY too fast. I'd have liked to seen it stretched out more over time. Good job though.
Author's Response: Yeah, it did all happen a bit fast I suppose, I guess I was just impatient, lol. Thanks for reading!
Summary: **** WARNING****
I am letting you guys know now that this was my very first fan fic. I wrote it when I was in 10 grade in 1998. It is oh so very Mary Sue and totally unrealistic. I am going through it and making a few minor changes, but the story line is staying just as cheesy as ever, so if you are in the mood for a good old fashion back in the day fan fic, you might like this one.....
It is about a girl Group called eCHo who goes on tour with BSB and shares a tour bus with them. You can imagine all of the drama that happens on this tour! My friends and I actaully had a girl group called eCHo and the female characters in this story share the same names and appearances as my friends and I...I told you it was Mary Sue!
I hope you enjoy!
Categories: Fanfiction > Music > 98 Degrees, Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys, Fanfiction > Music > NSYNC
Characters: AJ, Brian, Drew, Group, Howie, JC, Jeff, Justin, Kevin, Lance, Nick, Other
Genres: Drama, Dramedy, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Domestic Violence, Graphic Sexual Content, Sexual Assault/Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 5739
Read Count: 395
I am letting you guys know now that this was my very first fan fic. I wrote it when I was in 10 grade in 1998. It is oh so very Mary Sue and totally unrealistic. I am going through it and making a few minor changes, but the story line is staying just as cheesy as ever, so if you are in the mood for a good old fashion back in the day fan fic, you might like this one.....
It is about a girl Group called eCHo who goes on tour with BSB and shares a tour bus with them. You can imagine all of the drama that happens on this tour! My friends and I actaully had a girl group called eCHo and the female characters in this story share the same names and appearances as my friends and I...I told you it was Mary Sue!
I hope you enjoy!
Categories: Fanfiction > Music > 98 Degrees, Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys, Fanfiction > Music > NSYNC
Characters: AJ, Brian, Drew, Group, Howie, JC, Jeff, Justin, Kevin, Lance, Nick, Other
Genres: Drama, Dramedy, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Domestic Violence, Graphic Sexual Content, Sexual Assault/Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 5739
Read Count: 395
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Published: 10/12/08 » Updated: 10/23/08
Published: 10/12/08 » Updated: 10/23/08
Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed
Date: 10/13/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Date: 10/13/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Aww... Brandy Lol Fics like this do bring back memories because I think we've all written something like this at one point or anpther in our writing careers. I think its cool that you are posting it to show your readers how far you've come. That's a great idea!
Author's Response: ****blushes****
I really love this story, but it is so cheesy! I read through the entire thing the other night and found myself laughing out loud at it. Like I said I am doing a few minor changes to it, but nothing major. I am having to type the entire thing because I wrote it by hand in high school. I can't believe I still have it! Thanks for the review Mel..... Now get to work!
Summary: 
Nick can't wait to spend a few weeks with his brother. He soon notices the 13-year-old is acting strange. Aaron is hiding a dark secret. Can Nick save him from this possible life or death nightmare?
Categories: Fanfiction > Music > Aaron Carter, Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Nick
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: Child Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 1550
Read Count: 12975
Nick can't wait to spend a few weeks with his brother. He soon notices the 13-year-old is acting strange. Aaron is hiding a dark secret. Can Nick save him from this possible life or death nightmare?
Categories: Fanfiction > Music > Aaron Carter, Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Nick
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: Child Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 1550
Read Count: 12975
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Published: 10/15/08 » Updated: 12/07/08
Published: 10/15/08 » Updated: 12/07/08
Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed
Date: 11/04/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Five: Answers
Date: 11/04/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Five: Answers
Wow... There's a LOT going on here. I love the storyline so far, but I think that the chapters are much too short to give it justice. I would llike to see longer chapters with a lot more detail. I feel like we're only just getting the surface of things.
Summary: Kris and Rachel backup dancers for the Black & Blue Tour. Read how their lives are turned upside down in their adventures with the Backstreet Boys.
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: AJ, Brian, Group, Howie, Kevin, Nick
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Domestic Violence, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 9842
Read Count: 1212
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: AJ, Brian, Group, Howie, Kevin, Nick
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Domestic Violence, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 9842
Read Count: 1212
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Published: 10/22/08 » Updated: 11/16/08
Published: 10/22/08 » Updated: 11/16/08
Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed
Date: 11/10/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Date: 11/10/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Hmm... I wonder what is up with Rachel? I am VERY curious!
Summary: Lauren’s been burned when it comes to relationships in the past and she’s fed up with guys. Will her faith be restored when she meets four guys that try to prove that there is still hope for her?
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Group, Nick
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 1081
Read Count: 3993
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Group, Nick
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 1081
Read Count: 3993
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Published: 10/26/08 » Updated: 10/26/08
Published: 10/26/08 » Updated: 10/26/08
Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed
Date: 10/26/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: 10/26/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Sounds pretty good so far although it is hard to tell from just a few hundred words. I see no reason why you shouldn't continue this.
Summary: A complicated love story like no other. Nick and Audrey have been friends for years. He cares for her deeply, she cares for him deeply. But Nick wants more than that ever since they met. So what's stopping him? There's just this tiny little thing that's in the way. Will he get what he truly wants or is it too impossible?
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: AJ, Nick, Other
Genres: Dramedy
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 8831
Read Count: 11769
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: AJ, Nick, Other
Genres: Dramedy
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 8831
Read Count: 11769
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Published: 11/02/08 » Updated: 01/22/10
Published: 11/02/08 » Updated: 01/22/10
Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed
Date: 11/10/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Cause = Time
Date: 11/10/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Cause = Time
Dude... I just reread this now after someone else's review and I can't believe I missed the fact that Casey is a chick! Well, this makes things a hell of a lot more interesting LOL. Sorry I totally had a blonde moment and I'm not even blonde. That explains a lot especially why Casey seemed so cool with Nick.
Author's Response: Haha fair enough. I just slipped it in there very subtly :)
Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed
Date: 11/10/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Cause = Time
Date: 11/10/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Cause = Time
Ooh I forgot she had a b/f... Ha arguing over paint colors? They sound like an old married couple already!
Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed
Date: 11/05/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Fire Eye'd Boy
Date: 11/05/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Fire Eye'd Boy
Ok I can't say two much after only two chapters, but for a first attempt I think this is pretty awesome! I LOVE Audrey and Nick's relationship. It's very flirty and they seem very comfortable with each other, but also they're not like annoying best friends that act like a couple and like sleep in bed with each other every night, which I find unrealistic. This story has a very promising start and I'll def keep checking it out!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I love the dynamic between them and really making them as human as possible.
Thanks a lot for leaving feedback :)
Summary: When Lila Babcock, an aspiring ballerina becomes ill and lands in the hospital, her world as she knows it is suddenly over. Nick Carter of the Backstreet Boys is in trouble. Caught drinking and driving he is sentenced with 150 hours of community service. Going to visit the childrens ward at Clifford Memorial Hospital he meets a girl who would end up changing his life in a way he never thought she could. With the help of his band mates and Jessica Rabinowitz, Lila's best friend, Nick works hard to save the soul of this fallen dancer.
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: AJ, Nick, Other
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Graphic Sexual Content, Sexual Assault/Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 7972
Read Count: 1520
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: AJ, Nick, Other
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Graphic Sexual Content, Sexual Assault/Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 7972
Read Count: 1520
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Published: 11/09/08 » Updated: 11/22/08
Published: 11/09/08 » Updated: 11/22/08
Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed
Date: 11/10/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1
Date: 11/10/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1
Aww poor Lila... This totally wasn't her fault and having this baby is definitely going to kill her dancing career. I'm a little suprised that she is deciding to keep it. Nice work though Anita! I love dance stories!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review Mel. I have to keep working on my story and catch up on my fan fic reading I am so behind and on yours too! Wish me luck on catching up!
Summary:
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Nick
Genres: Angst, Dramedy, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Death, Graphic Sexual Content, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 81351
Read Count: 58211
Being single in the city isn't always what the television shows make it out to be. It's not one swinging party after the next. Sometimes being alone is just that, lonely. What happens with two people; one a humble passionate pastry chef from Manhattan and the other, a single father in LA; find out they're not so alone after all?
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Nick
Genres: Angst, Dramedy, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Death, Graphic Sexual Content, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 81351
Read Count: 58211
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Published: 11/09/08 » Updated: 05/08/09
Published: 11/09/08 » Updated: 05/08/09
Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed
Date: 11/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Some Hearts Just Get All The Right Breaks
Date: 11/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Some Hearts Just Get All The Right Breaks
So I SHOULD be your first review yay! Nice to see that you finally posted this. I know that I read this like ages ago, but I needed a refresher. Aww... I totally feel Marie. why can't fate hurry up dammit! LOl Can't wait to read Chapter 2 cuz I don't think I've read that one.
Author's Response: I know can't we all? LOL Nick's got the loneliness too, but at least he doesn't live alone. Chapter two is almost done and I'll show you! Thankees hon!
Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed
Date: 11/11/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Rash Decisions Don't Itch Do They?
Date: 11/11/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Rash Decisions Don't Itch Do They?
Aww... I agree Marie does need a vacation if all she can talk about to Angel is her pastries! Poor Nick... Haha I know I told you this before, but it sounds like he went on a date with another character that we both know and love LOL
Author's Response: yes i know, i thought of that certain character as i was writing it LOL. I'm evil. And I totally need to write on that story too! thanks for reading hon!
Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed
Date: 11/13/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: In the City, City of Angels, Lonely as I am....
Author's Response: yeah to say that your sitch didn't help with inspiration would be a lie. I think we've all been there. And yes context is always better lol. I'm happy with it, and I was getting all flustered editing it cuz I was like wow they're just kissing and it's hot...damn lol. thanks so much hon!!!
Date: 11/13/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: In the City, City of Angels, Lonely as I am....
Aww poor Marie how she misunderstood the situation! I've so been there. Actually sounds VERY familair to me. You meet a nice guy and you think there might actually be a chance there and then nothing... Although I have a feeling that Marie may have better luck than me in the dating game with Nick lol. And you were right... The kisses did fit in better than I expected them to.
Author's Response: yeah to say that your sitch didn't help with inspiration would be a lie. I think we've all been there. And yes context is always better lol. I'm happy with it, and I was getting all flustered editing it cuz I was like wow they're just kissing and it's hot...damn lol. thanks so much hon!!!
Summary:
The Backstreet Boys are back in the studio, although the group has become a foursome. They are trying to figure out whether or not they can continue as a group, as well as decide what direction to take musically.
Meanwhile, two of the group members are having problems with their love lives. When AJ meets Michelle, he is instantly drawn to her. She, on the other hand, is not impressed with his bad-boy image. As their relationship progresses, a secret from her past threatens to tear them apart. A secret that could cost a life. Brian is having his own issues. In his case, though, a marriage is at stake.
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: AJ, Brian, Group
Genres: Drama, Romance, Suspense
Warnings: Domestic Violence, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 57665
Read Count: 58176
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Published: 11/10/08 » Updated: 01/30/09
Published: 11/10/08 » Updated: 01/30/09
Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed
Date: 11/29/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Date: 11/29/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Oh oh... Carmen and her big mouth... Now she's got poor Michelle all paranoid. It's really great that she's getting along so good with all the Backstreet girls!
Author's Response: Haha. Yeah, Michelle has some things to sort out. But, like you say, at least she has some friends to help her through everything now :) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Summary: "Baby I don't wanna waste another day
Keepin it inside, it's killing me
Cause all I ever wanted comes right down to you, to you
I wish that I could find the words to say
Baby I would tell you, every time you leave
I'm inconsolable"
She was a rising star, he was a falling star
She was in the beginning of her twenties, he was in the beginning of his thirties..
She was open to everything, he was closed to everything.
But she was fun either he was
She was wild either he was
Will they a chance?
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: AJ, Group
Genres: Angst, Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 4530
Read Count: 7739
Keepin it inside, it's killing me
Cause all I ever wanted comes right down to you, to you
I wish that I could find the words to say
Baby I would tell you, every time you leave
I'm inconsolable"
She was a rising star, he was a falling star
She was in the beginning of her twenties, he was in the beginning of his thirties..
She was open to everything, he was closed to everything.
But she was fun either he was
She was wild either he was
Will they a chance?
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: AJ, Group
Genres: Angst, Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 4530
Read Count: 7739
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Published: 11/18/08 » Updated: 11/22/08
Published: 11/18/08 » Updated: 11/22/08
Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed
Date: 11/22/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4
Date: 11/22/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4
I'd be really pissed at Nat for giving some guy keys to my house even if it was AJ lol She's definitely crossing the line here. So far, it is a nice story, but there are quite a few grammatical errors you may want to look at.
Author's Response: Hey! thanks for the review! I m so glad that some people actually read my story .Lol. The thimg is ,English isn't my mother tongue and as far as i moved here (us) to study english literature , thats a good opportunity for me to improve my skills at writing so anyways thanx for the review again! I will be checking my mistakes hope to hear from you again. Ciao
Summary: 
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: AJ, Howie, Kevin, Nick
Genres: Action, Alternate Universe, Romance
Warnings: Death, Graphic Sexual Content, Graphic Violence
Series: Jacklex Series
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 65809
Read Count: 55513
~~COMPLETED~~
When you realize there has never been anyone important in your life. You’ve never given or had affection and you don’t know what it’s like to love or be loved. What happens when your mission of destruction, is the one that teaches you all those emotions that you’ve been missing out on? When you’ve always been the best of the best and you’ve never failed a mission. Will you choose to continue to be the best or will you choose to love?
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: AJ, Howie, Kevin, Nick
Genres: Action, Alternate Universe, Romance
Warnings: Death, Graphic Sexual Content, Graphic Violence
Series: Jacklex Series
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 65809
Read Count: 55513
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Published: 11/20/08 » Updated: 04/01/09
Published: 11/20/08 » Updated: 04/01/09
Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed
Date: 05/17/09 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31
Date: 05/17/09 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31
I FINALLY finished this one! I've been trying to get caught back up the last few days. I saw there was a sequel which I'll start soon, but I'm guessing that Jack isn't really dead and I can't believe that Don got away! So sad though that Crystal had to lose everyone that she was close to. I'm sure she's pretty pissed off though now! Great job Erika!
Author's Response: OMG!! I had to squee when I saw your review. I had no idea that you were reading about Jack...that's so awesome. I'm glad that you liked it, I put a lot of work into this one and it's my baby. I was wondering, if there is anything that you think I could do to make it better, I know Julie gave me a pointer to work on my punctuation. I was wondering if you had any...you can always PM me. Thank you so much Mel *Squee*
