Ha! Leave it to Chris to screw things up between them. Last few chapters were pretty good. Although I do enjoy sex scenes its also nice to see other things happen too.

Aww... This story has a very cute premise to it although I'm not sure if Brian is as much as a Bible reader as he's made out to be. I hope they can work it out!

LMAO Now everytime I read a fortune cookie I'm gonna think "in bed" after it lol. So far I think this story has a lot of potential. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: he-he, Thank you so much!

Hmmm... Something tells me "Scott" is really Kevin lol

Author's Response: Yeah...it\'s funny but I feel weird using his Kevin over and over...LOL Dumb I know...how exciting your my first review (Woohoo)

You have a very cute plotline set up between Kayla and Kevin. I want to know if she finally gets through to Becky and can save her friendshp. My one piece of advice would be is when you are writing dialogue to start a new paragraph every time someone new speaks because then it gets confusing to read.

Author's Response: Oh thank you, i\'m glad that you find it interesting and I hope that you continue reading. As for the dialogue advice I will work on that thanks...

Author's Response: By the way thanks alot for reading and your review!

I don't know why I never read this story before, but I spent all day reading it today and I must say that I really like it! I really like the way that you write from Nick's perspective and there were quite a few moments that made me laugh. I know you hate writing romance, but it REALLY is good Rose.

Author's Response: Awww well thanks! lol well I can\'t say I hate writing it anymore. Cause I fell in love with writing this story as it progressed. I\'m glad you like it :)

Aww... I am so loving this story! I'm not much of a romantic, but even I'm going AWW! Guess its cuz its not as sugarcoated and cliched as other fan fics out there.

I still wanna know though how Cindy and Nick wound up sleeping together LOL I'm curious!

Author's Response: I debated on and off about explaining that from the begining. (about exactly what happened that night) I even had the whole thing planned out, but the more I thought about it, this story is being told by \"Cindy\" not the author so in the end I had to go with what she could piece together and after trying to spend so much time in Cindy\'d head, I really think she would decide not to exactly know. Not if she\'s trying to move forward... Does that make sense? But, WOW! I am flattered that a non romance lover such as yourself actually said \"Aww!\" Yea! I don\'t understand how oyou ever made it all the way through WTMH then. -lol. But thank you for your comment. I\'m glad I was successful at stepping outside the romance cliche. Normally I\'m the reason for the cliche!!

OMG Kelly... Let me first say that if I didn't know that you were the author I NEVER woulda guessed this is your story. It's SUCH a difference from WTMH. I can't believe the versatility you've shown. I LOVE the twist you put on the story of Cinderella. This is awesome!

Author's Response: Aw, you\'re such a sweetie. Yes, I have been working really hard to do something different. Most of my writing always has the same feel to it and I felt I really needed to change things up. I\'ve been having sooo much fun with it and I\'m glad to see that people have been appreciating the change. Thanks for the reviews and I\'m glad you\'re liking it!