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Hi, my name's Sarah. I'm 18 and a freshman at the University of Central Florida. Besides writing, I love dancing. I've been writing creative stories since 3rd grade, and I've been writing fan fiction since I was 12. I tend to write most of my fan fiction these days based on the Backstreet Boys [most likely revolving around the gorgeous, Nickolas Carter]. I've also written a lot of O-Town, Dream Street and Jesse McCartney fan fiction posted on other boards. I love meeting new people and I LOVE reviews! Feel free to e-mail me!

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A Little Taste of Sin by Mellz Bellz Rated: R [ - ]
Summary:

After betraying her trust yet again, Alyssa finally gave up on Nick. She moved on and began a seperate life far away from him. But there are some people that life just won't let you let go of. What happens when they find their lifes entwined once more? Now that the stakes are higher, will they risk losing everything they have for another chance? Sequel to Under my Skin.


Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Nick
Genres: Angst, Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Death, Graphic Sexual Content, Violence
 Series: Not Like We Predicted
Chapters: 61 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 329529
Read Count: 160236


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Published: 11/13/07 » Updated: 11/12/08
Reviewer: sarahmarie0727 Signed
Date: 11/16/07 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - Never Again

Hm. I'm interested to see where this goes. I'm really shocked to see Nick married off so quickly. He doesn't seem too interested in Alyssa anymore, either. Write more soon!

Author's Response: Yea it's definitely unexpected! Wanted to catch everyone off guard a bit. The rest of the story picks up about a year later, so let's see if things change any more in another year...

Reviewer: sarahmarie0727 Signed
Date: 11/19/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - Here's to You, Mrs. Robinson

I'm definitely still enjoying it. I'm very interested to see what direction you take with this. I guess I like Sean. He seems like a nice guy.

I'm just really interested to see where this all heads.

Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Haha I'm glad that you don't have anything against Sean. So many readers want to immdiately write him off because he's not Nick, but so far I think I've presented him as an all around good guy. I prefer to make characters like Sean and Shayla not entirely unlikeable because it makes things a little more complicated in the end. Not to say that they might change as the story evolves... Thanks a lot Sarah!

Reviewer: sarahmarie0727 Signed
Date: 11/20/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - Jumping the Gun

Ah, I loved it! I really like how you're starting back with some history. I know you mentioned it's not incredibly interesting, but at the same time, it's information we really need to know - so, job well done on making the "boring stuff" entertaining! lol.

I have respect for Sean, I just don't think him and Alyssa are meant to be together. I don't even know why. He just doesn't seem her type. Maybe that's because Nick and Sean are like, complete opposites - at least, that's the way I'm seeing it right now.

I'm not sure how I feel about Shayla. You're doing a great job at making these characters likeable. It would be hard for me to do that, considering I'd want Alyssa and Nick together. So, I commend you on that, as well.

Overall [sorry this was so long, lol] I think you're doing an amazing job. I don't "latch" on to stories easily, but I'm really hooked on this one. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response:

Thanks Sarah! Backstory really sucks as a writer especially when you have SOOO many good ideas planned, but it REALLY is necesary for the action to have meaning, so I'm glad that you appreciate it. Thankfully enough we move on to some action next chapter!

Sean and Nick are opposites which I think makes it so interesting. I am trying to write both him and Shayla has unbiased as possibe especially at this point of the story. There's no reason not to like either of them (so far at least) outside of the fact that they're keeping Alyssa and Nick apart.

Reviewer: sarahmarie0727 Signed
Date: 11/29/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4- Hey Jealously

Ohh! I like it =]. I think Alyssa and Sean are still incredibly close. I'm not even sure Alyssa's thinking about Nick the way he seems to be thinking about her. Unfortunately, I see something bad happening to Sean overseas. As sad as it is, I think that might be the only way Alyssa would ever decide to move on from him. But who knows? Maybe I'm wrong. We'll just have to wait and see.

I kinda feel bad for Shayla. She seems to really want kids with Nick but we can all tell he's totally not ready. I guess it's somewhat understandable. I just hope he doesn't do anything to screw up with Shayla. I don't see Alyssa showing interest in him if he decides to cheat on Shayla and get with her. That's why she broke up with him in the first place. But again, I'm just the outsider, haha.

Great job! I really can't wait to see what happens. Good luck with your presentation =]

Author's Response: Thanks for the insightful feedback Sarah! I'm really interested in hearing your thoughts about both couples. Alyssa and Sean are very close, but I think in the next few chapters you'll start to see a few possible cracks in their relationship. As for Nick and Shayla, I'm glad that you see where she's coming from. The question is will she get Nick to change his mind or not?

Someday We'll Know by starbeamz2 Rated: PG [ - ]
Summary:

Someday we'll know
If love can move a mountain...
Someday we'll know
Why the sky is blue...
Someday we'll know
Why I wasn't meant for you...

Someday you'll know
That I was the one for you...

Years ago, Nick Carter swore he would never again have anything to do with Spencer Wilde. Unfortunately for him, their now twenty-one year old daughter has other plans…


Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Nick
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
 Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 47934
Read Count: 31349


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Published: 11/19/07 » Updated: 02/09/08
Reviewer: sarahmarie0727 Signed
Date: 11/19/07 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Hmm. Very interesting! I'm interested to see where you're taking this story =] Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope it goes the way I planned, and I hope you stay interested =)

In Pieces by Sakabelle Rated: R [ - ]
Summary: Past Featured StoryEight years ago, Ashleigh Dane was just a Backstreet Boys groupie. Now, the memories and feelings about Nick Carter that she had once buried threaten to turn her life upside down.
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Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Nick
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: Graphic Sexual Content
 Series: Dreaming a Reality
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 51661
Read Count: 72932


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Published: 01/11/08 » Updated: 02/21/08
Reviewer: sarahmarie0727 Signed
Date: 02/05/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Wow! I just got all caught up with this story and I absolutely love it! It's very well written and the characters are so realistic! You're doing a great job.

I love the way you allow Ashleigh's character to have flaws. It really makes it all so much more realistic. And how you make Nick flawed and real by how he treats his "groupies".

Overall, it's really wonderful! I can't wait to read more :].

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I was really worried before the last chapter I posted, thinking it was too unrealistic and not believable. It makes me happy to know that you think I\'m pulling it off well. Thanks again :) I\'ll try to update sometime today or tomorrow!

Reviewer: sarahmarie0727 Signed
Date: 02/05/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

I'm loving it! I think it was good for Ashleigh to get all that out and really tell Nick why she was hurt or what not. Because I think he honestly thought she was just some groupie that wouldn't care in the long run.

Well done! Can't wait to read more :]

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you\'re liking it :) I think Nick\'s matured a little in between now and when he and Ashleigh first met. His ideals have changed a little, I think. Thanks again!!

Reviewer: sarahmarie0727 Signed
Date: 02/12/08 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Ah! I absolutely loved this chapter [sorry I disappeared for a while, lol]. Great job!

I really love how you made Ashleigh the one to give it away at the end. Instead of Nick asking her to leave or something like that. It makes her seem less vulnerable, yet at the same time, the reader knows she's hurting.

Wonderful job!
-On to read the next chapter :]-

Author's Response: Thank you! Don\'t worry about disappearing, it\'s kind of a busy time of year (exams, bleh) But I\'m really glad you enjoyed this chapter :) I tossed around the idea of having her stay until Nick had to leave for his flight, but it didn\'t seem to fit her character. Not future Ashleigh, anyway. Thanks again!

Reviewer: sarahmarie0727 Signed
Date: 02/12/08 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

I'm still loving it :].
Nick just doesn't understand that his "relationship", if you can even call it that, with Ashleigh is entirely different than Brian's relationship with Leighanne. Silly boy, lol.

I love how you keep going back and forth between the past and present. At first I thought it might be confusing, but it's really not :]. It gives us an insight as to what happened in the past so we can learn more about the characters as we go :].

Another job well done!

Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m glad you\'re not finding it confusing, sometimes it gets confusing for me to write.. I keep having to refer backwards to the older chapters hehe. Nick really is clueless, isn\'t he? :P

Reviewer: sarahmarie0727 Signed
Date: 02/12/08 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Hm! Nick called her, eh? I don't blame Joey at all for being upset with Ashleigh. I know my best friend would have reacted the same way. But at the same time, I really believe Ashleigh has deeper feelings for Nick...and I think [especially by that phone call] that Nick has deeper feelings for her.

I'm really lovin' it! -On to read the next one :)-

Job well done!

Author's Response: I think you\'re right that they have deeper feelings for each other, but at the same time they hardly know each other and it really seems like a risky thing to get into. Thanks again! :)

Reviewer: sarahmarie0727 Signed
Date: 02/12/08 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Great job, again!

I can definitely tell, though, how Ashleigh & Nick barely even had a relationship here. Like how you said at the end, "Ashleigh and Nick fell asleep beside each other without even so much as a kiss."

Great detail! Lovin' itttt :].

Author's Response: Thanks!! Yup, Nick\'s basically just using her for a companion, and Ashleigh really thinks he\'s in it for something more. It\'s hard to write, because I feel really awful for her, she\'s so oblivious.

Reviewer: sarahmarie0727 Signed
Date: 02/12/08 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Oh man, what a complicated situation!

It seems like the only reason she's with Matt is because she feels like she's supposed to be? And here Matt's practically bringing her down and telling her she's not worth it [not in those words, obviously lol] by putting down her coffee shop. I think she should be with Nick!

Lol, great update! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you :) I think she\'s with Matt because things were good in the beginning and along the way it sort of changed, but she\'s spent so much time with him already and her friends and family like him, that\'s she\'s afraid to leave. Plus there\'s no guarantee that a relationship with Nick would work out. Thanks again for reading :)

Reviewer: sarahmarie0727 Signed
Date: 02/14/08 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Aw, I feel so sad for Ashleigh. He's completely taking advantage of her. Poor girl :[.

This chapter was great! Write more soon!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, past Nick is kind of a douche... but perhaps future Nick will make up for it ;) I\'ll try to get another update posted as soon as I can! Thanks again hun!

Lost Without You by elle Rated: PG [ - ]
Summary:
I keep trying to find my way but all I know is I'm lost without you.


She didn't spend the rest of her life with him, but he spent the rest of his with her.

Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Nick
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
 Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 1970
Read Count: 858


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Published: 01/07/09 » Updated: 01/07/09
Reviewer: sarahmarie0727 Signed
Date: 01/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Lost Without You

Wow. I don't think I've ever read something that made me cry. But this definitely did. Wonderful writing! Loved it!